The Secret of the “Secret of the One-Legged Golfer” Headline

10:19am
Hastings Minn

Golf!

I’m out to hit the links in about an hour.

First time this season, which is a shame—the weather’s been perfect and I’ve missed a lot of great opportunities.

No worries. I’m not a good golfer anyway.

Hey are you familiar with John Carlton’s headline:

“The Secret of the One Legged Golfer”

This ad took John over an hour of interviewing his vendor before he heard this “throw-away” story.

The one-legged golfer could drive the ball further and more straight than most others.

His secret?

Balance at the tee box.

And Carlton knew when he heard this—it was not a throw-away story but the making of a great ad.

It’s these small stories that create attention-grabbing headlines and copy.

Don’t overlook the stories in your product or service. Put them front and center.